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Discussion in 'Landscape & Cityscape' started by dorf2001, Jun 24, 2010.

  1. dorf2001

    dorf2001 TPF Noob!

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    Dorf welcome to the forum! You will find youi'll get comments if you post just 1-5 pics at a time and number them.

    Amazing location to be shooting, where is this? The only one that does anything for me is the third from last. Thats an awesome scene with the houses on the cliff. However it could be improved with better composition imo by including more sky and putting the houses on the top third and the cliff on the lower third of the photo.

    Check out the rule of thirds, golden rule etc.
     
  4. Robin Usagani

    Robin Usagani Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    The first 2 looks like a webcam picture. The rest just look like a point and shoot result. Nice spot though!
     
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    Well they do look amateur. It would be easier for us if you were a little more specific in what help you wanted.
     
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    They seem a little soft on the focus, slightly overexposed, and a couple of the horizons need to be straightened.. :thumbup:

    Looks like a good area to take some great shots......:D
     
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    horizon is crooked...
     

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