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Here are some of the very few pictures I have online, most of the time I use film but I just started getting them on CD's as well. But these are just different pictures I have taken and I would like to know what anyone thinks of them. Thanks

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Your second offering looks very interesting with the perfect clarity of the kid in the green shirt. I'd like to see a blow up of this shot, cropped to take out most of the sky and grass. I think it would look dramatic to even crop to where there was nothing above the head and below the feet of the Green Shirt Kid.

I'd be interested in seeing more like this.

-S
 
#3 stands out for me, although I would have avoided cropping her chin, and maybe used a longer focal length lens. This looks a little wide.
 
Hi, I would agree with Matt that #3 is a little wide-looking, BUT easily fixed by cropping to just above the eyebrow. Lose some of that forehead. Do that, and you have a very arresting image here. Nice!
 
Thanks for the input, it really helps. I am new at this so yeah it excites me when you guys give me new ideas.
 
i really like your composition in the first and third one :D .... it appears that the image have been resized to small and enlarged again? ... perhaps during the scanning process?
 

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