Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by agrteknolan, Mar 9, 2009.
Should I try this with a wider DOF?
Hmm, I'll put together a better shot I guess.
Sorry, I really can't tell what it is -- it isn't abstract enough for me to appreciate just the forms and lines, and I can't make sense even though I know it must have to do with beer or such.
It's wine, I suppose this is more informative:
Fermentation « A G R T E K
I agree with Dcclark in that its either not abstract enough, or doesn't have enough of a subject.
I think you could maybe try shooting at a more extreme angle so that the shapes formed by the blass were a little more engaging, or make it less abstract by giving it some context.
I will say that I do like how you're honing in on the layer of bubbles on top of the liquid, that should be the thing that you exaggerate if you want to take the pic closer in, otherwise, the location will make the pic if you want to show the context.
anyway, just my thoughts...
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