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  1. I'm new to photos

    I'm new to photos TPF Noob!

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    It's been a while so here are a few from my brother's birthday party!

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    or black and white

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    The first two have a very snapshot feel to them. The second one is a little out of focus. The thing about the flowers is the left is lit up, but the rightmost portion isn't. The flowers are also a clipped on the right side. I really hope I'm not coming across as being mean. That's not my intention. Just my observations.
     
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    Ha no your good I thought on the flowers that made it look cool oh well :lol:

    On the first one I actually thought looked ok more professional but what does a newb know! :lol:
     
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    a bit out of focus? too snapshoty?
     
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    these are ok. keep going with it...especially the candids.
     
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    the sharpness in all of these is great! number 2 needs more lighting though
     
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    I'm new to photos TPF Noob!

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    ye i know i didnt want to flash them so i didnt should have
     
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    1- what was in that glass she just drank?? not the best expression, looks drunk.
    2- its a snapshot, looks like there was some movement, little blurry around the top of her head and her shirt
    3,4- not sure what to say... the comp. is bad, poor lighting and drab fake flowers are not very interesting.
    Sorry not very positive, but thats how I see them, keep shooting, you will get it!
     
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    what if she was drunk hmm nah jk! ye real flowers are always better and I mean it's little kids I can't get them to stay still. : (
     

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