Few new pics for C&C

Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by timlair, Aug 16, 2010.

  1. timlair

    timlair TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Aug 14, 2010
    Messages:
    225
    Likes Received:
    1
    Location:
    Kansas City
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    I love looking at everyons pics they post for c&c. So i figured maybe you guys do too!

    1. Went down to the Missouri River to take a walk with my girlfriend. It was out 1 year anny, she wasnt too happy when i took the camera...Theres an edit of it i did for my girlfriend at EDIT [​IMG]

    2. KC royals Friday Night Fireworks
    [​IMG]

    3. Took out some of the color, just because. It gives it more of a vintage look i think.
    [​IMG]

    4. Too close for comfort...
    [​IMG]
     
  2. DirtyDFeckers

    DirtyDFeckers TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Jul 28, 2010
    Messages:
    488
    Likes Received:
    2
    Location:
    Savannah, GA
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    The first image looks like the focus could have been a little sharper on the "in focus" flower. I like the fireworks shot. The image of the building IMO is a little boring.
     
  3. DanFinePhotography

    DanFinePhotography TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Aug 13, 2010
    Messages:
    680
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Redmond, OR
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    #2 could have been a little crisper but a really good shot with lots of great color
     
  4. timlair

    timlair TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Aug 14, 2010
    Messages:
    225
    Likes Received:
    1
    Location:
    Kansas City
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    TBH idk why i liked the building shot either. The flowers were tough to get into focus because it was windy. Thanks for the input guys
     
  5. carvinrocks2

    carvinrocks2 TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Jul 12, 2010
    Messages:
    91
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Oklahoma
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    I like the fireworks shots, but the rest don't do much for me!
     
  6. abnormalreply

    abnormalreply TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    May 1, 2010
    Messages:
    91
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    New York, NY
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    1- I feel like you have way too much space around the subject. I think a tighter shot would be better. A good crop could make this a lot better.
    2- Indeed, fireworks ought to be shot with a fairly long exposure, but I think you had the shutter open for a bit too long, causing the center to become a huge ball of white; this can probably be fixed in PP. I also think there's a lot going on around that's a tad distracting. If you don't mind, here's what I would've done with it:
    [​IMG]

    3- I find this one rather boring. Maybe if you took it from an angle or something? Like the bottom right, shooting towards the upper left.

    4- The only thing I don't like about this one is the huge white line on the right side; it's very distracting. Without that, I think it'd be a decent shot.

    Hope this was helpful =]
     

Share This Page