few pics!! C&C please.

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  1. Aw3033

    Aw3033 TPF Noob!

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    I got a new flash (sb400) so i was trying it out on my bass amp and i liked the way they turned out, kinda boring, but in my opinion its looks cool

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    This third one was when i went to downtown Ann Arbor, MI and there was this guy dancing in this ally to Michael Jackson songs.

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    Please let me know what you think.
     
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    reznap No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    #1 - The focus isn't where it should be.. should be a bit closer to read VOLUME sharp. No big deal, you were messing around with flash..

    #2 - I really like it. Perfect focus, the bokeh of the knobs looks cool. Shallow DOF works. Not sure if the dust takes anything or adds anything - maybe adds realism, grittiness..

    #3 is pretty interesting. I like the you told us that he was dancing to Michael Jackson, gives the image much more depth. I'd crop the yellow off the top but I like the dark space at the bottom.

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  3. Aw3033

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    thanks man, i really appreciate it.
     

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