Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by AmericanJesus, May 19, 2008.
Feedback is appreciated!
Love the first and third one.
1. 3. 5 are good. Two would be better if the heads did not overlap. on 4 the strand of hair is too distracting, 6 is just boring to me. Otherwise good exposure but nees a boost of contrast.
Thanks for the feedback!
Not bad, and a far sight better than I would do. I would like to have seen more light on the 5th image (man with the print shirt). I like the last image, almost looks like it could be an album cover.
Oh my, these are beautiful!!
reminds me of the 70's pictures...
I have thoughts on the close-up on the girl's face, which I all in all like because her gaze is so intense.
Now my question to you is: you must have noticed that strand of hair, and you and she together either decided to place it there on purpose, or you - as the photographer - decided not to ask her to brush it away with her hand before you took the photo. Why?
Maybe, if we could see where it come from (we know, of course, but if the crop weren't so close), it would make somewhat more "sense". But now? Her gaze is still very intense, and her face is very pretty, and the "fill-the-frame-style" is appreciated, but that strand of hair...?
I dont like to ask whom i shoot to adjust whats going on naturally. To have her moved the hair wouldla betrayed that. AND its cropped so tightly because its not croppped! was shot with a fixed 105mm lens.
Thank you very much for the feedbacks!
just like the first one. i find the others to be "normal" pictures.
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