Finally got outside...

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  1. BigRC

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    Finally had a nice day outside... got to snap a couple shots!

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    Let me know what ya think! :) Critique is welcomed...
     
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    whats the point of the third one? there doesnt seem to be any subject
     
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    Thanks! :D Keep the critique coming!
     
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    While not particularly exciting, the subject is obviously the house.
     
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    thank you matt, i was waiting for someone to comment...


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    of the three, the first is my fav.... kinda intriguing...
     
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    i agree with Bunky, third is boring, but the dog one is a great action shot
     
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    hey rc,

    good to know you are getting out :)

    1. Interesting shot, the angle intrigues me. I like the idea. To me the most interest part in that the head seems to shimmer. I think its good that you experimented with this shot, maybe try different shadow poses on different surfaces and textures, maybe mixed with other shadows.

    2. This is my favourite of the lot! Very good action shot, i love the dogs and sticks shadow on the grass. My only suggestion would be to simplify the shot, the river in the background is a bit distracting from the action going on. Do you have any more in this series?

    3. well hrrm :scratch: its a house alright, ain't it? lol, i guess i should ask the question, what do you find intriguing about the house - is it your home? Are you just trying to capture your home and a spring day? Maybe you should frame the foreground with some daffodils or something. One quick note the hose is a bit backlit from the sun, therefore the shadows fall in front of the house and block out all the detail.

    thanks for posting!
     

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