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    i thought it was kind of ironic in a way...maybe i should have used a different title though :)
     
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    i wonder if i'm allowed to post it again in the photo gallery...
     
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    It's a fun photo. The twig behind the bird really bothers me, and I wish the background was a bit blurrier. Both are easy fixes in photoshop if you're up for that :)
    Another thing - being that a bird is suppose to be the central figure I find it hard to focus on him (or her) because the bird is so much darker than the sign. The first thing I see is "Reserved Parking" then the bottom of the sign, then eventually I get to the bird. I know it's a one of a kind shot and you wont be able to retake the picture, but I'm sure you can ballance it out in photoshop too.

    Anton
     
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    thanks for the comment anton!

    i'm afraid you're right about the brightness...i edited it alot after i posted it, i might post that one if i get around to it. I blurred the background too, but i didnt clone the twigs out. now that i think of it, those are pretty distracting. It was a rather quick moment, i just shot it as quick as i could before the bird flew off. probably should have just posted this in the gallery, but thanks for the critique, i appreciate it!
     
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    I like your avatar as a photo, but as an avatar it is extremely distracting. Sorry.
     
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