Fire Alarm C&C

Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by er111a, Nov 9, 2009.

  1. er111a

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    what yall think?
     
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    Doesn't do anything for me.
     
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    not sure im liking this one.
    it looks like an experiment in curves adjustment.
     
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  5. Bitter Jeweler

    Bitter Jeweler Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    Try cropping ALL the black space on the left out, and see what you get.
     
  6. er111a

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    anyone else?
     
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    Bitter Jeweler Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    Try cropping it, post that, and see what people think.
     
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    erilla, you ask for advice, Jeweler gives it to you, you quote it and completely ignore it? whats the point of asking advice then if all you want is praise?
     
  9. DennyCrane

    DennyCrane No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Seems over-processed.
     
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    Are you asking us how you can fix it, or how do we like it?

    If your asking how to fix it, I don't think you really can, it's not as if it's overexposed or has bad composure it's just plain boring.

    And if you wanna know if I like it, No. I don't.
     
  11. Bitter Jeweler

    Bitter Jeweler Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    It's a style choice.
    It's creative.
    He's thinking out of the box more than anyone in this forum.
    The art of photography can be more than just "perfect exposure".
    I like the the heavy tweak here. I like the contrasting glow it gives.
    It kind of gives a sense of, well, alarm.

    This guy has had a pretty shaky go in this forum, and took a lot of abuse.
    I finally see where his thought process lies, and I for one can appreciate his point of view.

    The composition on this image is poor, and detracts from the subject.
    I wish the OP would take my suggestion, and look for a better crop, and share that.

    How does that help?
    What don't you like? What could make it better?
    Learning to give better critiques, also helps YOU as a photographer.
     
  12. er111a

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    sorry took me some time here it is
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