First assignment for Basic Photo course

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Our first assignment for my Basic Photo course was simply "I am _______". I decided to attempt a shallow depth of field, with a pile of books & shoes in focus and myself messing around on the computer blurry in the background.

Here's what I came up with (two edits of the same shot):
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Thoughts? Tips? Any ideas of what I can do better, whether it's re-shooting or re-editing? I have already edited out the white spot on the bottom of the black shoe. :lol:

Thanks!
 
Good idea here.

I think the image is alright. I just wouldn't have cut off parts of the books or shoes.
 
The table is kind of distracting.. and I'm definitely with Korme on this one.. I wouldn't have cut off the shoes or the books. It's an awesome idea though..very unique. I like the colors in #1 better than the second one. They seem to be a lot more vibrant and the carpet helps lead the eye to you.
 

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