First attempt at framing and series

[SteveEllis]

Hi Guys,

I posted these for the architecture assignment, since nobody gives much feedback on the assignment threads I thought I would post them here to tr and get your opinions.

Thanks guys,
Steve

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[Rob]

They're all well exposed and you've done well to keep the tones under control in such a hard lighting situation. The textures have come out well for the same reason.

It's pretty damn hard to succeed in architectural photography without either a height advantage on your subject or a tilt shift lens to correct paralax type convergence of the vertical lines, and I do believe you've done about as well as it's possible to do in this situation without vastly different kit.

I would possibly have got a little further from the subject to counter the points I mentioned above, but that's just me!

Rob