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  1. Karalee

    Karalee hOtLiPs!

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    ........at trying to photograph flowers. I took a couple out of the boquet and put em in my light tent to see what I could come up with.
    Shot with ISO 400 film, with a couple of clamp reflector lights.

    Hit me, I know theres some flower experts in here.

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    Ye i like these, but i cant help think you went a little bit mad with the water spray?

    They are a bit distracting for me, i think a more subtle coverage of water would have been better.

    #1 is my fav though, it looks like layered sheets or somthing, very nice. :D :D
     
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    hi! I like the shadows in the second one... Those are nice photos, and water drops are nice too
     
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    They're all lovely Kara, but to me the 3rd pic is quite breathtakingly beautiful! The delicate colours and the detail you've captured are very lovely and the water drops enhance it.

    sue
     
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    I really like the 3rd one here. I'm not sure if it's something about it being in color, but #3 just seems to pop. This might just be me :oops: or my monitor, but I think that the 1st one might need a little more contrast? I like the water droplets on them too.
    Nice work! :thumbsup:
     
  6. Karalee

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    Thanks. I was wondering if I went a bit far with the water :lol:
     
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    I like them number 1 is the best IMO
     

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