First Attempts

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  1. Eric.

    Eric. TPF Noob!

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    Here is my one of my attempts from my first role of film. Tell me your thoughts.

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    I like the idea, I have taken a very similiar shot to this for a class. But I think it would help if there were more contrast, and if the entire picture were in focus.
     
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    The wheel is in motion yes? If so, how did you set that up? If it is not in motion then I'd like it focussed more sharply - but I like the feeling of motion...

    I like this ko pic that takes a detail of an everyday thing and makes me look at it clearly in a way I wouldnt usually. I like the B&Wness of it also.
     
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    No the wheel is not in Motion. I didn't realize until after that's how it looks. I think it's neat. The reason I chose not to do it all in focus is because Many of the biking photos i have seen are all more sharpley focused. I think the effect is kind of neat. I might try and get one that is focused more. Thanks for the compliments!
     

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