Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by Eric., Feb 21, 2005.
Here is my one of my attempts from my first role of film. Tell me your thoughts.
I like the idea, I have taken a very similiar shot to this for a class. But I think it would help if there were more contrast, and if the entire picture were in focus.
The wheel is in motion yes? If so, how did you set that up? If it is not in motion then I'd like it focussed more sharply - but I like the feeling of motion...
I like this ko pic that takes a detail of an everyday thing and makes me look at it clearly in a way I wouldnt usually. I like the B&Wness of it also.
No the wheel is not in Motion. I didn't realize until after that's how it looks. I think it's neat. The reason I chose not to do it all in focus is because Many of the biking photos i have seen are all more sharpley focused. I think the effect is kind of neat. I might try and get one that is focused more. Thanks for the compliments!
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