First B&W post

Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by xs400, Jul 29, 2007.

  1. xs400

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    I would appreciate C&C on the pic below. It's the Hyatt Hotel in San Francisco. Thanks in advance.

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    Oh very nice, I like it.
     
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    i really like the angle you shot it from but i feel it's a little too gray overall.
     
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    I like it a lot, but the upper left corner leaves much to be desired. I want to say something like I want some closure. I can't figure out what that part of the building is like, or why it's missing. It just sorta trails off. Does that make any sense? I really had to put on my critic face to notice it, though. It is a very nice shot.
     
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    You are correct about the left corner, I will remember your comment for future shots. Thanks.
     
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    perfecto
     
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    Nice! great feel to it,

    Billy
     
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    great repetition. very nice, i like it a lot. great repetition. nice lighting. great repetition. and nice composition oh and great repetition.
     
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    Great lines! I saw a similar building in a video tutorial recently that really pushed the contrast between the light facade of the building and the dark edges of the windows, etc. I think the effect would look really good on your building too.
     
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    Nice angle and processing !!
     

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