first DOF pic C&C as usual please

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  1. cosmoepic

    cosmoepic TPF Noob!

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    did this quick with a longer aperture just wanted to see how it would come out

    help?


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    My only criticism is that its not very sharp.

    Otherwise, the composure is great and it is very exciting.

    Some rendering with lighting effects could also make it more dramatic.
     
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    yeah i felt the same way ill try to do that thanks!
     
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    I must agree, it looks a little out of focus to me.

    Also, might add a little if you chose a specific number/ball to focus in the front (cue ball, or eight ball) just something to focus your attention a little more.

    but I like it!
     

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