First "fashion" shoot. C&C

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  1. alexanderdel

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    First time shooting something like this. Mostly just an experiment, to see where my abilities lie. Comments and criticism very welcome as well as tips to make the next shoot better.

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    My first criticism is that I don't see an image. :D
     
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    hahaha
    hang on. I'll fix it.
     
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    I don't see an image either. I like using photobucket host. Where you at in michigan? I am around the ann arbor area.
     
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    I'm located in Grand Rapids.
    Specifically Byron Center.
     
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    Should be fixed now.
     
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    Whoa are her lips like that?
     
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    Hahaha no. It's flesh toned make up on the outside then red lipstick in the middle.
     
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    The post, and light are lovely.
    I like the composition of # 1 especially.

    NOT digging the lips at all.
    Be mindful of truncating limbs at the joints.
     
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    Very nice pics alex. Ya im familiar where you are. Bout 2 and half hours west. Cool!
     
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    Great looking model and good pose on the first image. I really don't like the shadows covering the left portion of her body and arm. Maybe it is just my horrible monitor but if it were me I would dodge it up a bit. Also, not digging the lips at all, it looks like a myspace face.
     
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    I wasn't diggin the lips either..
    My rather flamboyant friend did the make up, and didn't listen to my criticism.
    So I shot regardless. haha

    We used just an industrial flood light for lighting, and I was surprised with the results..
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