first flower shot... cc please

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  1. momofthing1and2

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    It seems a little bright....if you darken it, you should see more detail on the flower. Very pretty though!! :)

    maybe like this?

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    Looks nice. A little over saturated for my likes but a nice capture none the less.

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    Thanks a bunch!
     
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    ya my only complaint that its too bright, and the light too harsh.
     
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    I like the original better than ATXShots' edit. The latter looks washed out.
     
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    Thanks. I tend to over-saturate! I like bright things I guess. lol!
     
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    Haha, I love bright warm colors so I know where your coming from. It always takes me a second look to realize I over did it. Here is an attempt to tone it down a bit without washing it out. I hope you don't mind, i noticed your info says its okay.

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    In retrospect I think I like your's more, Haha.
     
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    Thanks. i really just wanted the flower to pop! I am working on trying not to OVER do it though! thanks for taking the time to help me.
     
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    I like Beaminge's version best.

    Miranda, I would have the flower a little to the left in the frame rather than centred. It is a lovely flower.
     
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    Thanks for taking the time to look and give me some feedback!
     

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