First go at people

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by MrJ, Apr 12, 2009.

  1. MrJ

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    So I've had my D50 for a week now. :D This is my first go at shooting those um.. what do you call them? People?

    Thanks for looking, C&C is welcome!

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  2. nikonpreap

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    the first shot is a pretty good, but if you could some how photoshop that mole with hair growing out of it.... as it is very destracting... i know the attention is meant to be on his eyes but i cant help but keep getting drawn to that hairy mole..... now its beginning to freak me out
     
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    incredible detail in the eyes in the first shot! very cool.
     
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    Sorry, the mole stays! ;) Thanks though.

    Thanks teneighty, you don't think it's overdone? I can't decide.
     
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    I would tone down the sharpening on the eyes (first pic) a little. I love sharp eyes, but they're a bit much :p

    Nice though!
     
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    That's the first thing I looked at too... the mole.
     
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    Cool pictures
     
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    in comparison to the rest of the picture, it may be a bit much, maybe for another version of the pic try cropping out just the eyes in a long panorama, or try and add interest to the other parts of the face too?
     

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