First Model Shoot

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by royalWITHcheese2, Sep 3, 2008.

  1. royalWITHcheese2

    royalWITHcheese2 TPF Noob!

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    This is one of the shots from my first shoot, any tips or editing tips would be appreciated. There are also more from the shoot in the Flickr link in my signature.

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  2. Alpha

    Alpha Troll Extraordinaire

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    Great light, not a totally flattering pose/composition, way too soft.
     
  3. tirediron

    tirediron Watch the Birdy! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Agree with Alpha; would prefer to have her body at least 45 deg toward the camera.
     
  4. DragonHeart

    DragonHeart TPF Noob!

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    also, body blends almost into the background. Would think you would want it to 'stand out', not 'blend in'...
     
  5. John_Olexa

    John_Olexa No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    You got Potential thats for sure! A few minor things as said. Maybe a little to much empty space from the top down to the top of her head.... easy fix.

    Keep at it !! Heck, if nothing else you get to take pictures of pretty ladys! :D
     

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