First Model Shots *FIXED*

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  1. Sk8man

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    it was in an area with strong yellow street lights so it was very hard light to work with.
    i need you to help me choose the best edition to 2 photoes.

    on the first set i think that the third is the best and on the second - the first one is.

    i have some samples so here we go.

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    sorry for the past post with the broken links.
     
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    I can't see them! just a fortune city advert. 6 times.
     
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    Link doesnt work, when you click the thumbnails it blows the advert up lol.
     
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    i shall edit the first post and try another server.

    sorry for the inconvenient made by third party :(
     
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    Alirght, well, we'll be waiting!
     
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    fixed. plz comment.
     
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    That was quick. Um...I think they have promise, but for me, neither one quite does it for me. One of the things that bother me on the second (three) is the highlights in the face. Her face seems extra shiny. And the big flower in front of her just doesn't work for me. The first pic I do kinda like...the non-color one is a bit flat, so I'm glad you decided to put some color into them. But I'm not sure what else to say about them. They are still both better than I could do!
     
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    yes, her face shines like a flash light :D. it was very hard to photograph especially with flash and no tripod so i could dump the flash.
     
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    I perfer the first bunch over the second. But I wish she was lookin at the camera ;)

    I think the shine has already been brought up in the second one.

    Keep trying, Corrys right, your going somewhere with these.
     
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    she had a glass door behind her which reflected her face. unfortunatelly it is dark and not seen so good.
     

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