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Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by puhpuh, Nov 29, 2004.

  1. puhpuh

    puhpuh TPF Noob!

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    I live in Rotterdam in the Netherlands and I have been taking photographs for about 2 years. I take picture of numerous things and I usually do that using my Canon EOS-30. That is the main reason why I bought a Epson dia-scanner.

    To kick off, a pretty recent picture. Nothing has been photoshopped except for the trimming. 100% Cross-developing colours.

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    I made this picture in the Hague. If you like this picture be sure to check out www.unseen.nl as well.
     
  2. jadin

    jadin The Mad Hatter

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    It looks a little soft. I'd recommend running unsharp mask on it to see if that helps. Other than that it's a superb skate shot. Welcome to the forums!
     
  3. magali

    magali TPF Noob!

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    I like the composition, I like the strange yellow-green colors, I like the "blurred" aspect [​IMG] It's very graphical.

    just to tell something, You could show the sky a little more, not to cut the top of the building... :?
     

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