First outdoor shoot C&C please...

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  1. Bigpopa

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    This shoot is for Conquest clothing a sister brand to Take a Nap clothing company . They are a MMa clothing company.

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    Awesome. I love nipple piercings.


    Sorry, my input is limited.
     
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    well besides the model being very distracting, lol, they are good shots.

    i like 4 the best
     
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    Thanx for the comment nickisonfire yeah that is one of mine as well keep those comments and critique's comin.......
     
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    The colors look great in the first two. #4 is my favorite as well.
     
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    Hey Idaho thanx for the comment..............those colors do pop dont they........
     
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    The lighting is nice on these.

    I dont really like her pose in #1 or #2, they look a bit unnatural and forced. I guess I dont like the wall either, it's a bit distracting from the model. The flare on #3 is distracting. Maybe its me, but the focus doesn't seem to be spot on in #4.
     
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    Personally my eye is distracted by the moving (and hence blurred) vehicles in the background of the last two pictures - Otherwise very good.
     
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    Thanx for the comments I am taking them all in and will be applying it all to the next shoot . Keep them coming
     
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    #1 she has some stray hairs or something on her neck/chest. #3 her rib is stiking out too much for me, I think it's how she's standing.
     
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    bring me

    Three is my favorite. The focus and background exposure makes it look like shes standing in front of a painting! very nice shot.
     
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    # 2 the background is to distracting, if your trying to show the "product", too many colors detract from it.

    #1 Stray hairs, definitely get rid off. I've seen some great Bridal shots ruined with stray hairs.
    Otherwise very nice.

    JMO.
     

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