First Outdoor Shoot - CC Please

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by rCOSIO, Feb 26, 2010.

  1. rCOSIO

    rCOSIO TPF Noob!

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    My first outdoor shoot and seperating of colors with PS ... please CC, but be nice lol:

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  2. just x joey

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    I don't like how the background is B&W. this is so 90's. It also seems out of focus or blurry. Composition is nice as is the pose. Maybe retouch her underarm to get rid of that "crease."
     
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    Thx Joey ... yah color scheme is pretty outdated ... but the girl requested ... thannks for the feedback tho
     
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    You didn't do a very good job at masking around the fingers. If you used Photoshop try the pen tool and use a soft brush ;)
     
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    its a good job masking the fingers yes. i like to edit in quick mask mode, then make a selection. once that is done then i blur the edges. it works well for me.
     
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    selective color :(

    that hand position is extremely akward to me.

    i also agree that the whole image is a bit soft.
     
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    that b&w background really kills it for me. =/
     
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    edit your post saying that the selective colour was the client's request. Haha, else you'll just keep getting the same response.
     

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