first outing - botanical gardens (c&c please)

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  1. scribblenauts

    scribblenauts TPF Noob!

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    Hi guys, i'm very new to photography and have recently got a d90 and a tammy 17-50mm for my walkaround lens. Went to the gardens a few weeks ago as a first outing for taking proper photos.

    any comments and criticism is very much appreciated!

    sample shots, more can be found here http://www.flickr.com/photos/scribblenauts/sets/72157622715740058/

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  2. TJ K

    TJ K No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Woah slow down. I know you're excited to post but please only post 1 to 4 of your favorite pictures from the group and then ask for C&C. Way too many for anyone to go through and actually give C&C. Thanks
    tj
     
  3. scribblenauts

    scribblenauts TPF Noob!

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    ah i aplogise >< i'll delete some
     
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    TJ K No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Alright. Thank you. Just pick out your favorites 4 at most and I assure you, you will get much better C&C.
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    cheers for the advise :) as you've noticed i am a little bit too excited :blushing:
     
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    actually if you just number your photos it doesn't matter how many you post...
     
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    Ok, well, you have quite a lot of pics for c&c, overall, i thought they were very good, different and intriguing, that said, you mind telling me how you did photo 4 and 10? lots of PP or minimal? thankss :)

    try to choose 1 or 2 for c&c
     
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    sorry since i edited the post, i've lost track of which ones they are ><, mind posting a link to the picture instead?
     
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    not possible since you took off the photos ;), unless i go through your flicker but regardless it was the one with yellow flowers, focus in the middle, and the one with a person lying down on grass
     
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    Sorry but if you've been a part of this forum for more than a month you would realize that no it does matter how many you post. Either post what you know about or stop posting. Thanks
    tj
     
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    Bitter Jeweler Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    Read up on what constitutes good composition.
    Think about what you want to say about the subjects you choose, and focus on trying to convey that. Glancing through your photostream, I just see a bunch of random images.
     
  12. scribblenauts

    scribblenauts TPF Noob!

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    is it this one
    http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3001/4067349541_b4b12cc55d_b.jpg
    and this one
    http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2573/4116592189_9d2e577a55_o.jpg

    first one is not edited and 2nd one is my attempt at tilt photography (with photoshop)

    i agree Bitter Jeweler. I am finding it hard to find a good composition that means something more than just photos. thanks for the critique!
     

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