Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by er111a, Apr 27, 2010.
its been a while thought I would share this one, that is unedited
thoughts as well would be nice
Its awfully red... and a bit crooked. It might be a little better if the door was centered at the end of the hall?
I like it the red hallway with the mysterious door makes you wonder why is the hallway red and what's behind the door? It seems a little crooked to me but I am also tired so if it's it then I apologize. Why did you tale this photo? Just out of sheer curiousity and again I like it
I like the eerie feel to it as well....but it's definitely crooked. I know you said it was unedited, so maybe you planned to fix that?
yeah I can fix that in pp lol and I took it because it caught my eye
Super crooked....eep!:meh: ( but everyone has obviously stated that, and your aware of it)
I like the shadowing and reflections on the wall... and the shading..and the eerie feeling..
the stuff on the floor is distracting, and i wish the sign were more in focus.
The exit sign with the arrow pointing to the right kind of ruin it for me, especially since it's so bright. It keeps leading my eyes to the right wall to find the exit. Perhaps you should clone it out?
BTW, what's up with posting pre edit pics? you know people will makes all sorts of crit. on errors that you may know already. For example, in this case the door is tilted and by your admission, you knew it?
Is this for a 365 because it looks like one of those end of the day need to shoot something quick shots
If you plan to edit it...why did you post the unedited version? I've never understood why people post the non-final image.
Although the color is nice an vivid, it's not telling me a story. I just see a whole lot of red, a door, and a hallway. Tell the story and you are golden.
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