first pics ever!!! d70s

Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by stumpjumper21, Oct 31, 2008.

  1. stumpjumper21

    stumpjumper21 TPF Noob!

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    c and c please!

    undergroundap.blogspot.com -- the only pics there yet ;)
     
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    eh lets go in order
    1: could have a little more composition but yea it wasnt great conditions bright sun so the subject cant comfortably have there face lit up(not the best wording)

    2: I like the idea but the swich for some reason looks a tid bit out of focous, and the white balance could be better. These could be the result of my monitor.

    3: dont know at all what im supose to be looking at and you might want to not use a strobe just use a tripod and the natural lighting.

    4: I like the lighting looks good and the background isn't too distracting and again you could add more composition.


    5: not bad seems a tid bit dark i would want to look at my histogram and look at the light levels.


    6:Could have been a really nice shot but its blurry, too long of an exposure not to have a steady base at least a desk. But I don't know you might have wanted it like this because you put it online.


    Yea and just one thing I noticed is that allot of your pictures have a noticeable amount of grain I asked someone else that isn't a photographer and they didn't see any so I might be just me. So you might want to check your ISO.


    So thats all I can think of and if im technically wrong about something im sory but I have only been doing this for about a year now. Hope I helped!
     
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  3. chrisburke

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    paste your pictures here.. more people will view them and then CC...
     
  4. manaheim

    manaheim Jedi Bunnywabbit Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Congrats on the D70S! Awesome camera!

    I'd comment but I'm waaaaaaaaaaaaay too lazy to go to an external link. :) I'll anxiously await seeing your pics here, though!
     

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