First Pics with New AB 800's!!!! (NOT WORK SAFE!!)

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  1. bethany138

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    Ok..thats it for now......lol.. hope you enjoyed them! Please add any comments or suggestions you might have.

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    You put those lights to good use!
    Love the clarity of her eyes in #2 :thumbup:

    The left hand in #1 is pretty distracting after I look at it for a minute.
     
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    they look good, sharp as a tack...

    Have to agree with woodsac about the hand in #1, it distracted me too. Would have been nice to see a bit of light on the hair outline also

    a Shorter DOF on #3 would have worked well IMO
     
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    Thanks... I agree about # 3....but hindsight!!! lol.. I'll rework # 1 and see what I can do about her hand.

    Thanks!
     
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    I couldn't fix the hand on #1...but is this better??

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    Great shots, i think that the #3 edit makes it look better myself. I really like #1, the tones are perfect.
     
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    Thanks....More comments and critique please.....!! PLEASE! lol
     
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    I think I would like #1 best... except that hand... but great tones in it and pose.
    #2 looks good, a tip maybe have her open her lips just a tad. It just ads something. wet hair would be nice too, but it looks great and sharp.
    #3 I really like. I do agree with your fix though, brings more attention to the eyes and face. Nice work.
    #4 looks alittle flat... by that I dont mean the colors or contrast. Im talking about the puffy blanket on the bed. she looks like shes sinking into it or something (IMO). try a board under the blanket so shes not so sunk in or shoot on a table made up like a bed. other than that I like the pose and the hair.
    All in all they look good! keep it up!
     
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    the fix on #3 looks great, definate improvement, but i would be tempted to add a little more blur, just to the legs.
     
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    I agree about the DOF fix on #3, but I'd bring it up even further, to keep the focus on her face, as opposed to er...other places...
     
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    Ok...how is this??
     
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    just to through you for a loop, i like the origanal redo better, the new one is a bit to much for me.
     

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