First pics

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by chaos4fun, Jan 22, 2009.

  1. chaos4fun

    chaos4fun TPF Noob!

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    These are some of my first attempts at photography and also pp. Comments welcome still have a ton to learn.


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  2. Captain IK

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    These are good shots for a first attempt. Cute kid!
    They do seem a little flat to me. Need to adjust the exposure a bit and up the contrast...IMHO
     
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    Not bad. Lacks contrast. you should be able to fix that in pp.
     
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    I love #2 and #4, the angles are great. They are a bit unusual and therefore interesting. Nice work, but HoosierJoe is right, they seem to lack a little contrast, but that can be easily fixed. Great job for your first attempts!
     
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    Thanks for the feedback. I will try to adjust the contrast and see if I can touch them up a bit. I am still pretty new with photoshop so any input is greatly appreciated.
     
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    They look a little noisy. The first one especially under the slide and such. Otherwise I think you're off to a good start.
     
  7. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    The first is a tad noisy, yes, but that smile! It melts your heart! With a model like that, with SUCH as cute, slightly mischievous, smile, you just cannot go wrong. I really like that first photo very much because of that smile! Just some more contrasts, and a bit of USM, and ... cuuuute! :D
     
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    I guess I'm in the minority, because I like the contrast just fine. I really like the skin tones, especially in #1.
     

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