First pictures from new camera

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by DeludedScareCrow, Nov 28, 2008.

  1. DeludedScareCrow

    DeludedScareCrow TPF Noob!

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    Opinions please. :D

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  2. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    I'm not sure Photo 2 should be in the www for long!!!!!! :shock: Assuming she's your daughter and you're her mom or dad, you would wish to protect her somewhat... This photo doesn't help.
     
  3. ATXshots

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    Hmm...I think those are shorts.

    I think the photos are a little blurry. Also the angle is weird, you kinda distorted her head in 1 & 2.

    I like 4 the best, but wish she was smiling...she looks a little scared. Cute daughter :) shell be a great model for you.
     
  4. ANDS!

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    Yea. Those are shorts.

    The first two could be improved upon if she were in focus and you minimized the clutter behind her; I don't mind the angle. Works for me.
     
  5. Jeremy Lim

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    Good on you for getting down on your hands and knees and shooting at level. Though I think you're a bit close, we get a much more intimate view over the downwards perspective.
     
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    Her face is way too dark in #3. Perhaps a bit o' fill flash would help?

    -Dan
     

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