First pictures I have posted...feedback please

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  1. ewbug

    ewbug TPF Noob!

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    I would appreciate comments & feedback so I can improve. Thanks!

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    I think you captured some really nice facial expressons, especially in #3. Overall, these pictures are nice IMO. I'd say #3 is the strongest of the bunch, I also like #2.

    Hwever, some areas in these are blown out, such as the left side ot the girl's dress in #3.
     
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    Thanks! What is IMO? I see what you are saying on the parts that are blown out. I don't think I noticed the left side of her dress, so thank you. I will watch for that.
     
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    WOW ur amazing girl!
     
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    2 is overexposed
    3 is soft focus
    4 has a green cast

    1 on the other hand, looks GREAT!

    Fix the other 3 and they will be winners too!
     
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    imo=in my opinion
     
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    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    The last two missed the focus and I doubt that anything will bring it back. Only a reshoot can help in that case.

    If Photo 2 was meant to be "high key", the boy should not have worn this deeply red sweater of his, so I tend to assume it is simply overexposed.

    The first is VERY GOOD.
     
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    I love the third picture very lively and cute, i also like 2nd one,good work you can improve it to best by editing little bit
     
  9. cnutco

    cnutco No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Besides the exposure... I like the first one the best. Not sure abut the composure though.
     

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