First poem post.

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  1. fallen_petal

    fallen_petal TPF Noob!

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    Invisable man

    Intoxicated and unstable
    the invisable man
    his will to stand on a table
    yelling at non existant fans

    drinks his choice
    the invisable man
    lonely echo in his voice
    shaking paper thin hands

    disturbingly desperate
    the invisable man
    everyone is already too late
    for he wants to be left in his own little land.
     
  2. terri

    terri Administrator Staff Member Supporting Member

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    A tragic little poem.... Very nice!
     

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