First Portrait Attempt

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  1. Anubis

    Anubis TPF Noob!

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    Looking for a bit of constructive C&C on my first attempt at portraiture please. Technical info; ISO250, f4.5, 1/80, 70mm, RAW.

    Cheers,

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    Cool man, I like it. I love how the eyes sparkle. The DOF could have been a tad thinner..but that's just being nit-picky.;)
     
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    The only thing I really don't like is all that skin shine, from what I'm assuming is a strobe of some sort. It's not very attractive. >.<
     
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    Thanks for the feedback!

    I used a gold reflector to light him, I think I held it a little too close hence the skin shine. I need an assistant to hold it further away next time :)

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