First Portrait - Black & White (C&C Please)

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  1. PhotoJones

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    So this is my first portrait. This is of my girlfriend and I. What do you think? :)

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    Thanks!
     
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    :thumbup: Other than a couple distracting items in the background (volley ball net & picnic pagoda), looks like a good photo to me.
     
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    Thanks billy! I removed the volleyball net and sand and blurred out the background some. I will post it later today, I must get some sleep.
     
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    Besides the background items, I like it. Looks like something that would be on a poster or bag at Hollister or Abercrombie. Try taking it on a beach or a field with high grass.
     
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    Super cute! U guys look like ur modeling something lol :)
    -id experement with that pose..a more interesting background.
    Good shot though! :)
     
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    Looks like it came from a Hollister catalog. lol
     

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