First Portrait. Open to your views

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  1. bmxerXcore

    bmxerXcore TPF Noob!

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    hi this is my second post on this forum, i decided to try a portrait style photo of my mother.

    im not sure on the composition and i would like you guys to give me some critique please and how i can make it better

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    thanks in advance for any feedback.​
     
  2. anton980

    anton980 TPF Noob!

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    The DOF is excellent and I like the texture very much! What's going on on the top of the image - that black object blocking part of the photo is distracting.
     
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    Nice portrait. I wish I could get one of my family to sit for me! :lol:

    Try bringing the right side of the frame right into the corner of her eye. It looks a little off with a small part of her eye showing.

    Also maybe try playing with light directions to bring out the features of her face more.
     

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