Discussion in 'People Photography' started by Breeezo Photography, Apr 12, 2010.
yup well, this is my first shoot with a person!
any thing to improve?
Looks a little soft or out of focus or something and the wb looks a bit off too.
For this shot, I'd try with a square crop too. It's *too* asymmetrical right now with the one post/pillar completely there and the other cut off.
Cute girl though. I love the skinny ones where their dresses always look like they could fall off at any minute I'm not old yet so I'm allowed to say that!
Now that I've said that, I'd spin the model around 180º so that her zipper side on her dress isn't showing. Just a little nit-pick.
mdtusz pretty much said it all
I'd even go one step further on the crop, and cut out the two pillars completely.. they super distract my eyes from the girl
MDTUSZpretty much said it.. i agree.
Id also crop the pillars... and i would have her hold her hair differently... looks tacky. Blunt, but its just my opinion.
Aww I feel so loved when people agree with me:hugs:
Aww! :hugs: hahaha!!!
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