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  1. Breeezo Photography

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    yup well, this is my first shoot with a person!
    any thing to improve?

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    Looks a little soft or out of focus or something and the wb looks a bit off too.

    For this shot, I'd try with a square crop too. It's *too* asymmetrical right now with the one post/pillar completely there and the other cut off.

    Cute girl though. I love the skinny ones where their dresses always look like they could fall off at any minute:lol: I'm not old yet so I'm allowed to say that!
     
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    Now that I've said that, I'd spin the model around 180ยบ so that her zipper side on her dress isn't showing. Just a little nit-pick.
     
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    mdtusz pretty much said it all :)
     
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    I'd even go one step further on the crop, and cut out the two pillars completely.. they super distract my eyes from the girl
     
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    MDTUSZpretty much said it.. i agree.
    Id also crop the pillars... and i would have her hold her hair differently... looks tacky. Blunt, but its just my opinion.
     
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    Aww I feel so loved when people agree with me:hugs:
     
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    Aww! :hugs: hahaha!!! :)
     

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