First Post! C+C please

Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by rimusan, Sep 28, 2009.

  1. rimusan

    rimusan TPF Noob!

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    Im new to photography, I haven't edited any of these. please c+c


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  2. Future

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    I'm far from an expert, but I'll give it a shot.

    Number one: I like this photo, but maybe you should of came in more and took the photograph from the right, giving the viewer a better view of the younger woman.

    Number two: A bit bland, and the green blur in the top right is distracting. Try to make the flower stick out more.

    Number three: This picture would of been nice is you put the white flower in on a pile of dead leaves. Show us that the decayed life is taking over the beauty of the flower.

    Number four: Mind your frame disruption. On the right side the frame cuts off a budding flower, so maybe crop that out? Other than that it's a nice photograph to me.

    I'm sure if you're lucky some other members will give you better technical advice. Keep up the good work.
     
  3. Johan13

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    I a also fairly new. I like the color and lighting I am just not a huge fan of the composition. They sit to in the middle for my taste. Lots of potential though, good work:)
     

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