First Post - Critique Please!

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by BWChronos, Aug 9, 2010.

  1. BWChronos

    BWChronos TPF Noob!

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    Here are a couple of photos I took over the weekend, any advice/critique would be greatly appreciated!

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  2. GotaLuvThosPens

    GotaLuvThosPens TPF Noob!

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    The first one is super cute. I wish the lead room was to the right side though.
    The second shot is composed nicely for a tight shot but the subject it pretty dark (my screen does suck though) I think if she had a serious face the darkness might work. But with the big smile I feel like she needs to be brighter.

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