First post for critique

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  1. iphoto

    iphoto TPF Noob!

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    This is my first post for critique here, :)

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  2. JonMikal

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    excellent! i'm thinking too much sky and can't decide.
     
  3. ferny

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    :mrgreen:
     
  4. Firelance

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    great shot! :eek:
     
  5. sukhoon2

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    Excellent!

    Do you Xanga?
     
  6. canonrebel

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    I like the contrast and the technical aspects. The horizontal is off. There's too much sky that does nothing to help the image. A 35mm aspect with portrait orientation would, IMHO, improve the image very much.

    Your image is quality and is definitely a keeper.
     
  7. Nan C

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    Great shot, maybe crop out some of the sky.
     

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