First post, Night photo, C&C

Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by RyanMahe, Jan 5, 2010.

  1. RyanMahe

    RyanMahe TPF Noob!

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    I've been shooting for about 6 months now. Now that its the new year though Im trying to get out alot more often. This is one of a few pictures I took tonight. So please any advice you could give me to improve is appreciated. :)

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  2. Hybrid Designz

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    Very nice! Love L.T.E!!
     
  3. JAFO28

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    I like it. The curve in the road leads you in to the little bit of light left in the sky. One thin might make better though is cropping out some of the black sky. Seems like a lot of dead space.
     
  4. fokker

    fokker No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Nice pic, though I agree with the above comment about cropping out some of the dead space at the top. Composition is nice otherwise.
     
  5. AlbertoDeRoma

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    Very nice, and I agree that you could/should take out some of the "dead space" on top.

    Alberto
     
  6. Bitter Jeweler

    Bitter Jeweler Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    I kinda like the dead space.
    It adds a feeling of insignificance.
     

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