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Discussion in 'People Photography' started by JackkBox, Mar 10, 2008.

  1. JackkBox

    JackkBox TPF Noob!

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    My girlfriend and my best friend and I all got bored today so we did this.
    you may critique or whatever you do around here =)
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    It was a very large set so Ill leave it off here. Also heres a photo I took of myself today for good measure.
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  2. crystal_lynn

    crystal_lynn I am sure I sound childish

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    I like the second photo.

    The first photo the model that is farther away looks dead because of the way she is holding her head.

    Not sure what you were going for in some of the photos...
     
  3. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    The way the shorter hair model places her feet in 3 is a bit awkward, and not too flattering.

    What a setting!
    I like the one of yourself, though it is pretty dark. I'm sure you tried all not to blow the stained glass windows, which is GOOD.

    Lightwise, I personally like the first one best.
     

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