Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by cso, Jul 19, 2004.
Let 'er rip...
Welcome to the site.
Your photo is much to big to see on the screen which makes it hard to critique.
Try to keep your images less than 800 pixels wide.
Fixed...thanks for the tip...
I like the DOF here, but I don't understand this photo. Your comment would be useful here
looks like they are playing hopscotch, or something similar...maybe it would be better if you would have gotten their feet in the pic?
Thanks for the feedback...
Well, I was trying to evoke strong feelings of curiousity and benign mystery...I didn't want it to be literal. Did I completely miss it, or is it simply annoying to not know what's going on?
Sorry, but at the first sight I thought that there is something wrong whith the boy's shoes...
lol...well that's good to know... :?
I like not knowing what's happening. Makes it interesting.
Thanks v much for the feedback mentos/jadin...much appreciated
Both children are obviously envolved in the same activity and there's a party-like atmosphere in the background, so I assumed the children were dancing.
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