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Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by cso, Jul 19, 2004.

  1. cso

    cso TPF Noob!

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    Let 'er rip...

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  2. Big Mike

    Big Mike I am Big, I am Mike Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Welcome to the site.

    Your photo is much to big to see on the screen which makes it hard to critique.

    Try to keep your images less than 800 pixels wide.
     
  3. cso

    cso TPF Noob!

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    Fixed...thanks for the tip...
     
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    mentos_007 The Freshmaker!

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    I like the DOF here, but I don't understand this photo. Your comment would be useful here
     
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    Corry Flirtacious and Bodacious Supporting Member

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    looks like they are playing hopscotch, or something similar...maybe it would be better if you would have gotten their feet in the pic?
     
  6. cso

    cso TPF Noob!

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    Thanks for the feedback...

    Well, I was trying to evoke strong feelings of curiousity and benign mystery...I didn't want it to be literal. Did I completely miss it, or is it simply annoying to not know what's going on?
     
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    mentos_007 The Freshmaker!

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    Sorry, but at the first sight I thought that there is something wrong whith the boy's shoes... :p
     
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    lol...well that's good to know... :?
     
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    I like not knowing what's happening. Makes it interesting.
     
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    Thanks v much for the feedback mentos/jadin...much appreciated
     
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    Both children are obviously envolved in the same activity and there's a party-like atmosphere in the background, so I assumed the children were dancing.
     

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