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Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by Photoboy, Aug 4, 2004.

  1. Photoboy

    Photoboy TPF Noob!

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    Feel free to be as harsh as need be. I'm new to the forum so let's see how brash we can be. :)

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    This is one I did for my in-laws 44th Anniversary.
     
  2. Osmer_Toby

    Osmer_Toby TPF Noob!

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    nice composition, but the dof too shallow- focus drops off on your mother's-in-law fingers- would be improved if focus was sharp all the way to her fingertips.

    also some hot-spots- father's pinky fingernail and on both rings.

    all that said, it's still a great shot.
    welcome to the forum.
     
  3. hobbes28

    hobbes28 Incredible Supporting Member

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    I'll have to agree with Toby on this one. It would be better if your mother-in-law's fingers were in focus. The only thing that I could add is if you had about half an inch more on the right to get a little more of your father's hand. Good work, though, and welcome to the forum!
     
  4. Alison

    Alison Swiss Army Friend Supporting Member

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    Ditto to the first comments. I do like the color you've chosen for this, nice feeling for the overall photo. Get MILs ring and hand in focus and you've got a winner.
     

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