first posted pics-- 2 still lifes

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  1. alexlang

    alexlang TPF Noob!

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    this was my first shot at still lifes...please give some constructive responses
    p.s. sorry about the poor image quality (flatbed scanner)

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  2. Manimillion

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    I'm loving the first picture, but the cross like shadow on the top right part of the bucket kind of distracts me. Don't get me wrong I still think its a very good picture, its just what I think would have made a very good picture even better.
     
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    I like the reflections and variety in colour in the second one. Good work.
     
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    this weekend im gonna have another go at these...hopefully ill be able to get rid of that annoying shadow on top of the basket
     
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    In the first image - was the imperfection in the apple shown intentionally? I cant help but look at it :)
     
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    Yeh i agree, with still life i think everything has to be completely pristene with no imperfections.
     
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    yeah i noticed that to...its actually because the first time i posed that pic the basket was leaning on that part but the sticker was showing so i had to move it....i guess something pushed on the basket too hard
     
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    Photoshop will fix that :)
     

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