first shoot with strobes

[noob873]

Haven't been posting my work in a while, but heres one of my first shots with my strobes.

C&C wanted. I want to know what/how I can improve.

 

[muuris]

I like the idea, but my opinion is, that the right side of the face is too dark, there could be some difference between backround and face.

 

[craig]

You have some nice shapes and tones. Good approach starting minimal. I wold definitely kick in a bounce.

Love & Bass

 

[gian133]

i like it. as ^ said a few things could be fixed/added but i think its good. if only i could have got a shot like that when i first tried my strobes.

nice work.

 

[noob873]

I actually tried having a fill from camera right through an umbrella at low power but it wasnt going with the look I wanted of the dark right side, maybe a slight back light even? I should've tried that.

 

[noob873]

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[noob873]

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[woojiebear]

i really like it!
i haven't tried strobes yet but i'm not such my result would be this dramatic!
the shadows are effective & yes, maybe the face is too dark and blends in with the background...but i like it!! nice job
cute pout too

 

[adamwilliamking]

I actually tried having a fill from camera right through an umbrella at low power but it wasnt going with the look I wanted of the dark right side, maybe a slight back light even? I should've tried that.

White bristol board or if you like spending money a proper reflector, start at about 2 feet away and than 3 feet and than 4. You can keep the shadow effect well making some stuff visible, like an eye.

 

[92sir]

I really like this the way it is good job!!