bazooka
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I ordered a used 100mm from Adorama but it came with a damaged front end where the cap clips on, but I took some shots in the back yard before sending it back just to make sure I'd be happy replacing the lens.
Please comment on composition, DOF, PP, or whatever you feel I could do to improve these shots.
#1. I like this the best of the 3. However, I'm distracted that the backside of the bee is covered by a foreground element. Does it bother you?
#2. Similar to #1, but the bee isn't covered. I like the detail in the wings, but I prefer the subject angle in #1 and the composition here seems "off".
#3. At first I liked the similicity of this one, but after reading about half of a book I got on landscapes (obviously not this, but trying to apply the general principles), I wonder if there is too much dead space?
I took probably 20 shots to get these, most were OOF or bad composition. I'm looking for solid constructive critiques here so I can improve. Thanks!
Please comment on composition, DOF, PP, or whatever you feel I could do to improve these shots.
#1. I like this the best of the 3. However, I'm distracted that the backside of the bee is covered by a foreground element. Does it bother you?
#2. Similar to #1, but the bee isn't covered. I like the detail in the wings, but I prefer the subject angle in #1 and the composition here seems "off".
#3. At first I liked the similicity of this one, but after reading about half of a book I got on landscapes (obviously not this, but trying to apply the general principles), I wonder if there is too much dead space?
I took probably 20 shots to get these, most were OOF or bad composition. I'm looking for solid constructive critiques here so I can improve. Thanks!