first shot c&c

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  1. Imran

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    my first shot.. comments pls

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    They both look like they needed a slightly higher shutter speed as they are both blurry. The first one could be a focus issue also. The second one the shoes are cut off and the bottom left is blown out.
     
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    mwcfarms No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Curious to why you set your ISo to 800 in the second shot. Both look a bit soft (out of focus) to me. The first one had potential to be a good shot but its oof and the white object top left is drawing my eye away. The second shot is just shoes that are shot from straight over top. Sorry these dont work for me.
     
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    A good start, but not without some areas for improvement. As noted in the above critiques there are some basics such as exposure and composition that you should start with.
     
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    Both images look a little soft. Maybe the shot would be better if the dew is actually dripping and you caught a shot of it.

    Higher shutter speed please :)
     
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    first one is interesting
     
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    1) has potential...seems a little blurry out of focus
    2) boring snapshot.
     
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    The first is a nice shot, probably would have been better to use a macro setting or a lens with a macro.

    The second, well uhm... kinda boring.
     

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