First "street" shots + 1 other for c&c please

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  1. TylerF

    TylerF TPF Noob!

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    tried some street shots today, got rejected the first time after building up the nerve to ask. but i think it helped thicken my skin. the second lady agreed to let me and in turn i offered to send her prints so she can send them to her son in iraq who she hasnt seen in 5 years.

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    another from the night

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    C&C welcome btw. Be harsh if needed
     
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    I like the chair, would be nice if it was more centered, but I like it.
     
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    for me, Number 1 would be just a touch better if she actually wasnt looking at the camera. Kinda like she was looking away thinking of her son, if you know what I mean. Still, very good shots.
     
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    Yeah, people were eyeing me down in the store, I caught a weird vibe lol. What about the ones of the young lady?
     
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    I only see an ol lady
     
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    I know. I was being sarcastic/nice about her lol.
     
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    Personally i wouldn't class the first 2 shots as street shots because they don't take in enough of the environment
     
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    I like the chair shot. It seems to be a bit tilted though, and the ladder coming out of the chair feels wierd. A neat shot though. Makes me want to sit down in that chair.
     
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    Thanks. Yeah, its not perfect. I might try it again sometime lol

    I don't know what to classify it as then. I didn't know her and approached her asking if I could take some pictures of her.
     
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    the later coming out of the chair is weird but interesting none the less, I spent more then a few seconds analyzing the pic which is good! Not really feeling the ol lady pics don't know why...
     
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    haha thanks, it was my first time photographing someone in public. i thought she looked interesting.
     

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