First Swimsuit Model Pics C&C greatly appreciated

Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by shortpballer, Jan 6, 2010.

  1. shortpballer

    shortpballer TPF Noob!

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    Let me know what you think! Constructive criticism is very appreciated and welcomed!

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  2. bigtwinky

    bigtwinky No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Havent seen you post in a while, looks like you are really digging photography and doing a great job at it man.

    I'm not liking the over exposure in 1 and 3, specially in 3.

    There are odd shadows going on in 2, straight line one going down at the bottom of the frame...what is this from?

    #4 is a killer shot, love the exposure, sharpness, position.... nicely done
     
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    Number 4!!!!!!!!!
     
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    Hooker771 TPF Noob!

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    I really like 2 and 4. I scrolled number 2 to where the shadow was cropped out on the ground and I think it really adds emphasis to the model and her face. Give it a try.
     
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    The brightness of the water reflection in #1 hurts my eyes

    The shadow in 2 is distracting

    4 is a gorgeous shot
     
  6. Derrel

    Derrel Mr. Rain Cloud

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    Your work is getting better very rapidly. This thread,and the male model thread you posted tonight, together, show how fast you are progressing. With another couple of years under your belt, you will be able to get commercial jobs and do a good job on them. I think there are some technical quibbles with these, but I do think agree with Big Twinky -- it is apparent that you are really "digging into" photography.
     
  7. K.Li

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    I really like number 4, others have already pointed out the exposure on the others, but with number 1 her pose especially with the right arm could be done to make the body flow in a better way and more graceful.
     

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