First time developing raw :) all cc welcome and wanted

Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by almaswimmer2010, Aug 9, 2008.

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  1. almaswimmer2010

    almaswimmer2010 TPF Noob!

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    ive fallen in love with raw now just need to know if it looks good to you my educated peers.
     
  2. reg

    reg TPF Noob!

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    the first 4 and #7 all seem way too high contast.
     
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    1. High contrast, under-exposed and not fond of the angle. Additionally some fill light subject left would have helped.

    2. As per #1

    3. Ummm... nice branches?

    4. This one has potential; I quite like the overall idea, and the bright sky behind works. It needs a re-shoot in a slightly different location without the cars. Because of the sky, the image itself is at least 2/3 stop under-exposed. Be careful to avoid cropping little bits of things (her foot) out.

    5. Good exposure and expression in this one; perhaps a bit too tightly cropped on her face. As well, the background really detracts from the image.

    6. A little too much contrast, and really don't like the expression.

    7. Nice expression, good pose, but not such a good location and you've cropped too close to the front.

    8. Cropped fingers on her right hand, slightly over-exposed, and the expression; looks like she's going to slap you.

    9. Nice conversion, just a bit under-exposed (~ 1/2 stop), but really don't like the angle.

    Overall, some nice work, and creative thinking with a few minor technical issues. The comments on poses and expressions are purely subjective; if they work for you and her, that's what counts.

    Just my $00.02 worth - your milage may vary.

    ~John
     
  4. almaswimmer2010

    almaswimmer2010 TPF Noob!

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    thanks for the replys, we were on our way inside to watch a movie so i had a 5 min hey look at me photoshoot so the location isnt my fav either.
     

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